MY "MaSk"

by LoveTear   Jul 14, 2008


*There's so much no one knows and so much no one sees,
about the way I feel inside, my thoughts and all my needs.

Maybe it's that they don't look,
or the fact that I don't show,
Either way there are things inside that no one seems 2know.

I want 2 show the world,
I want everyone to see,
all the thoughts and the ideas that flow inside of me.
Maybe u haven't took the time 2 notice or maybe u just don't dare,
To find out who I am and 2 show that u truely care.
I'm screaming on the inside,
A smile is what u see,
but I am not content with the person I seem to be.
There's a different person on the inside,
that I can't seem 2 show,
but maybe if u took the time,
that person u could know. *

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  • 15 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    I like this one, its short and says all it needs to say. You're sorta like me, no one can really figure me out easily, its because I'm not the kind of person to talks about myself and my feelings a lot, but trust me when the right person comes along you'll find yourself taking off that mask without even knowing it.

  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    I really love this poem and I am sure that so many people can realate, including me. The rhyme and flow were perfect. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NeverSayForever

    I get what your saying. its not easy to show the world your feelings. sometimes they dont understand or they just dont care. no-one should spoil there 'perfect' little world ehy? (: great poem (: !

  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    It the same feeling that I have. Everybody thinks that you are hollow from the inside,just because you don't tell them your secrets and thoughts while your heart is a deep ocean.
    nice poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Ugh
    you just remined me of my old painful days

    i would summarize my comment on this "alwasy draw smiles at your face even if they are fakes, you don't know one day they may become real"

    good poem

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