I really enjoyed reading this poem. the flow was wonderful and the rhymes were well chosen, no forced unnecessary rhymes. great job! 5/5

Well,being as I'm only 16 I can't really say I relate just yet but,hey,2 more years to go-lol-Great poem though.The word choice was brillant && I loved how it ended in a question.5/5

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Well thats an important phase of life... for me I was able to vote ..LOL ..:)
Well written.. It could be felt that being 18 is important for you... a time wen you hv to make your own decisions.. a new maturity level is reached...

good write... flow was a little off at some places... also i would suggest you to keep the length of lines same.. it makes it easier to read... but thats just a suggestion...

keep writing... :)

It is a bit weird at first when you turn 18 because you're considered an adult and suddenly over night everything becomes a lot more serious. We can still be kids at heart but everything just gets bigger...Excellent job 5/5 GG23 - Happy Birthday to Melanie :)

Well i was i wish i was 18 again and it is a turning point in your life to decide what path your goin to choose to go down