"Waiting for the sun to rise
Wake the night that I despise
Watching shadows on my wall
Trying to forget it all"

Wow, what a captivating stanza! Really got me interested in this poem.

"Songs of dark and songs of night
Blurring my so impaired sight
Stars are leering in the clouds
Glaring down without a sound"

^Such descriptions and the words you used really blow me away, I love how you wrote, "Songs of dark and songs of night"

"Trees are mourning in the rain
Never easing all my pain
Voices running through my mind
Listening as my thoughts unwind"

I love how you really got me into this, your rhyming and flow is perfect, and you really showed the emotions that you were feeling.

"Waiting for all sense to leave
Nothing that I canâ??t perceive"

^Just delete that ?? thing, it happens sometimes when you have apostrophes in certain words......

Ovearll, nice job, really enjoyed this. 5/5

The flow is amazing. Emotion is transferred to me so easily. Great work, keep it up!