Thief

by RavishingEruption   Jul 15, 2008


I gave you everything I could
At least as much as I dared
I was glad to find someone like you
Because I thought you really cared

But as I told you secrets
Allowed myself to love
You told me reasons why we couldn't be
But you were what I was dreaming of

I should've followed my instinct
And never let you in
You stole my trust and feeling
And now they won't return again

The hands tick slowly past
Minutes pass me by
I try to think of truths you've said
But they all turn into lies

You gave me your reasons
Of why we wouldn't last
You should've given me the truth
For that's all that I asked

I've held your hand through hardships
Through troubled times and tears
I never saw you as a thief
Not in a million years

But what you stole was valuable
To nobody but me
So I'm writing this to you
Hoping that you'll set them free

I need my trust and love back
It's them I can't live without
And since you've left me lonely
All I feel is doubt

I hope you don't feel guilty
I made them seem fair game
But you didn't give them back
And that's just not the same

You thief! You cad! You scoundrel!
Taking what wasn't your's...
Leaving only emptiness
And closing open doors

I have no one to blame
But I and I alone
But I thought with you
My heart was in a safety zone

I guess I was wrong.....

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  • 16 years ago

    by PRiNCESS SKiTTLEZ

    OMg !! LoVeD iT !! iT wAs A gReAt pOeM .. kEeP wRiTiNg CuZ yOuR gOoD aT iT !!

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    The flow was very well done the message was very clear and the images of loss were very vivid I liked this a lot and the plot and story stretched out so you wanted to know what happend great work Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by FaithHopeNLove

    First of all, I love this poem! I can completely relate. As I think most of us can. Its deffiantely a poem I would read again and again.

    Your writting is very simple, the meaning very exposed, and it has a rhyme scheme. But its flow is kinda....blocked. It reads smothly, then gets a little off beat. But a few simple changes could perfect it. Overall, fantastic job. Truely one to be proud of.

  • 16 years ago

    by Aaron Martin

    Awww!!! thats so sad..

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Awww wow i loved it!!!

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