Awww. i love this poem. its got a lot of emotion and i love how you repeat the same line at the begging of every stanza, its very structured and really helps with the flow and add to an easy read. Lovely job. 5/5

I like the repetition. I, too, find myself in love with a man I'll never be able to have. :P
I loved the flow and emotion of this poem. Very good, even wonderful. lol

~Kail

This poem is unique in its own way. It is refreshing to read.. What I liked most about this poem was your thoughts. You have been thinking a lot about this, haven't you? You have been wondering this dilemma you have a best friend...then you start to feel...you fall in love... That this soul mate-thingy...only existing in our imagination...

A wonderful poem! Keep on writing!

Very well done. The repitition of the first line to begin each stanza made perfect sense as a new question followed each time. It flowed very nicely and the rhyming didn't seem forced in anyway. 5/5

Very differently written poem. Liked your style of expressing. Well written.

I feel this poem has great potential with a few minor tweaks.

"Because of all this, soul mates are simply a myth."

I feel you should take away 'simply' as the flow is better without :)

And the last line may need a little rephrasing as the final line of a poem is one of the most important as it sums up or concludes the previous lines.
With a little tweaking, this poem will be completye.
Well done,
and congratulations on getting runner up
You deserved it :)

Oh geez, this is like my exact situation at the moment.. stanzas 1 and 2 summed everything up as to what I could relate to! I loved the repitition of Can I ask you a question, will you answer me? That was awesome and somewhat helped the flow. The flow was amazing. Great job. 5/5.

Ahhh this is a topic alot of people write about.. but that doesnt even matter because i love reading poems like this.. my best friend fell in love with me once. and he told me how he felt so i had to be honest and let him know i didnt feel the same. it sucks to be in that situation... and if this is true for you then i hope that you have the courage to one day tell him how you feel because you'll never know if he feels the same if you dont open yourself up to him.

the flow was great.. and i like your use of repeatition. simply amazing poem. 5/5

I've never read anything like this before. The thing I got our of this I might be wrong just the way I was reading it. I love how you kept on asking "can I ask you a question" then wrote a question after then finally told us what you thought about this man you like. I like the thought of this. The way you put this poem was amazing.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

This is a very well written piece it flows easly and has a depth of emotion in it that really allows he reader to connect to it. The only advise I would be tempted to give you would be to try it with out the rhyming as it will sound more sophisticated.

I really love this poem...

this is very unique. we're in the same boat, i too fell in love with my best friend and i don't know how can i tell my feelings for him..

keep on writing! 5/5

Wow....I Loved The Repetivness, It Absolutely Just Brought The Poem Together.
I Have Found Myself In This Situation Many Times But I Have Come To Realize That It's Easier And A Lot Less Stressful To Stay Out Of Those Situations. I Waited Almost 2 Years And Have Found The One. So Don't Ever Say That Things R Impossible..

Great Poem, Keep Writing
Maddi

This brings back so many memories, but in different ways. I was in love with someone, however it was a girl, and I remember feeling the same way because at the time she as my best friend and I remember loving her from a distance and never being able to act on it because she was in love with someone else.

OMG LOVE IT! IT IS SOO TRUUU3

One of my favorites.