Very nice and I slowly came into tune with each of your words.
Make believe alls alright
Plunge to-wards the bubbly lake
Sip the sun, laze around
Grass cushion our head to sleep

sounds like a very lovely place to be where the hearts full of love rest within what seems to be a blanket of peace you have provided for these lovers thoughts. peace - enjoyed it

Undo all the hurt, magic away all the pain, erase the oceans of tears, sew up the millions of broken hearts; yes, it is true - lovers can fall in love again!

Well done

Michael

Ummm........ it's good. i liked this pretention!

'Come my love, kiss me now
Taste my lips of ancient hue
Seal and stamp with promises true
For with you I belong'
Great lines!