Um, I agree with you, it does need some more work. It was simple, but good and cute. I liked the imagery in it. :)

The topic is great as well as your thoughts and ideas in writing your poem! I am anxious to read this when you get it all fine-tuned!

I love the first stanza a lot, you explained how love is like a flower.. and then you continue to go on with the whole idea. You get really in depth with how it is like a flower.. nice comparision I think. It's very true. Hmm, your word choice was okay, but could have been better. Nice write. 5/5.

Great topic, nice job!! keep up the good work!!