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  • 16 years ago

    by Andree

    Very well written 5/5
    i liked it alot ..

  • 16 years ago

    by Iris

    This poem is so cool!! great job!!5/5(gotta keep the tradition for the 5/5s!!)

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    This is very good to read. Lines are very well written. Enjoyed it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ixora

    Beautiful. It takes a lot of talent to sum up so much in so little. It was perfectly written, you're one of my favorite authors on this website...keep it love and if you ever need to vent or be listened to I'm a pro at it ^_-. As one of my favorite people said: "You can't live in darkness all the time sooner or later everyone puts their ass in a sling."

    *^*Crow*^*

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Though short, very well written, keep it up...

  • 16 years ago

    by NeverSayForever

    XD 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal

    Wow i loved that :) keep it up x

  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is fantastic. I think this piece is terrific. The word choice is stunning, the flow immaculate, great job. 5/5