"Let me take your hand and a moment for a dance,"

^Doesn't make that much sense, try rewording it like this:

"Let me take your hand for a moment to dance"

"Down our memory lane, with every conrner spent,
Who'd have realised just how much this picture meant?"

conrner should be corner.....

realised should be realized....

Overall, good job, just fix those errors I pointed out and your poem will be even better. This was a great poem because of all the feeling you expressed towards her. I liked how you ended the poem with the one question.

P.S. Here's some titles names:

"Looking Back", "Not Just A Picture", "Just A Memory", or something to that extent.
Hope this helps!

Wow, this poem is amazing.
Although the stanzas were a bit long, it was neccessary for capturing the meaning of the poem.
The choosing of words here is spectacle, and the flow and rhymes go along perfectly.

A good name for this poem would be: "Framed Memories"

An amazing job 5/5

I loved the poem!! it's excellent. The rhyming is great.
Just Amazing 5/5

This is the first poem i have read here that gave me shivers!..it is SO emotional, and well expressed. I love everything about it...So im giving you 5+ HA! Looking 4ward to reading your other poems, i havent read yet.

All i can say is GREAT poem!! i love it!