Goodbye...my lover

by Hollywood   Jul 15, 2008


As I walk;
The walls come tumbling down.
As I walk;
I hear a loud shattered noise.
I look down ;
At shock as to what I see.
My heart;
Lyed out here on the floor.
Shattered into many pieces,
I have never seen it like this,
I cannot breath.

I am getting dizzy;
Everything is going round in round,
Everything around is falling down.
Before I go ;
Can I tell you something.
The years with you,
Were the best years of my life,
And if I never see you up there ,
I'll be back someday.
Goodbye;
Goodbye,
Till I see you again.

Goodbye;
Goodbye,
My love,
And I'll miss you till I see you again.

We have had alot to get to know;
Goodbye,
Goodbye,
Till i see you.

Goodbye;
goodbye....
Ill love.........
And I'll miss you till then

You were everything to me
But my love just fell to the ground
Shattered of loneliness
Goodbye!!!!
I love you

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  • 14 years ago

    by IML

    I like this poem. its really from the heart. ive felt that way sometimes too. ty for commenting on one of my poems a long time ago. i never did return the favor.
    thank you. :)
    ian

  • 15 years ago

    by Obscura

    That was so beautiful and passionate i really thought it was really good i was sad reading it because it reminded me of something but it was good

  • 15 years ago

    by LonelyNightsHurt

    The only critique I have is the spelling mistakes.
    Otherwise, it was beautifully written, and you could tell it came from the heart, with true emotions.
    Beautiful 10/5 Lol.
    Lonely xXx

  • 15 years ago

    by xX the left behind Xx

    Aww..this is sad..but it's an awesome write..

  • 15 years ago

    by Daisy

    Good!

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