Comments : Rainy days

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxSwissCheesexox

    It's pouring rain today,
    i hope it ends soon.

    Thats a great beginning.

    the thunder booms,
    I can't see the moon.

    Oh wow great.

    the lighting strikes,
    Is is very bright.

    Change Is is bery bright to It is very bright.

    it's going to hard to sleep tonight,
    the sky is very bright.

    wow that ending is great. But change It's going to hard to sleep tonight to It's going to be hard to sleep tonight.