Hey PAL...

by The Apathetic Emo   Jul 16, 2008


"No, you didn't wake me. I couldn't sleep anyways. ...Me? Well..."

I'm just laying here wallowing
In my Pain, Anger, and Loneliness,
Waiting for someone
To call this address.
Telling myself
To give up my plight,
'Cause no one's gonna call
At this time of night,
Knowing my hope
Is all in vain,
But wanting to forget
Loneliness, Anger, and Pain.

"Yes, I know, you're always there, but...it just doesn't feel like it..."

'Cause I'm so enveloped
In my Pain, Anger, and Loneliness
That nothing is able
To cut through my distress.
Keep telling myself
That it'll be alright,
There there are people who care
Laying just out of sight,
All the while hoping
For the tears to rain
And finally wash away
Loneliness, Anger, and Pain.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lousy Eyes

    I kind of wanted to cry when I first started reading it. Very good stucture. I like how you start out with a line of conversation in quotes and then go deeper after them. This poem actually hits me pretty hard so I don't want to sit here and analyze it like I do in school. I just want to appreciate it. It's good friend and I love every line.

  • 16 years ago

    by MikaMad15

    That Was Great! I Love How You Repeated The Line: "Anger,Lonliness & Pain" Brilliant Piece Of Work =]

  • 16 years ago

    by MikaMad15

    That Was Great! I Love How You Repeated The Line: "Anger,Lonliness & Pain" Brilliant Piece Of Work =]