Comments : Hey PAL...

  • 16 years ago

    by MikaMad15

    That Was Great! I Love How You Repeated The Line: "Anger,Lonliness & Pain" Brilliant Piece Of Work =]

  • 16 years ago

    by MikaMad15

    That Was Great! I Love How You Repeated The Line: "Anger,Lonliness & Pain" Brilliant Piece Of Work =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Lousy Eyes

    I kind of wanted to cry when I first started reading it. Very good stucture. I like how you start out with a line of conversation in quotes and then go deeper after them. This poem actually hits me pretty hard so I don't want to sit here and analyze it like I do in school. I just want to appreciate it. It's good friend and I love every line.