Open your mind

by Jayc   Jul 16, 2008


How can you say that you are high?
as if others are on earth and you're their sky.
when all you can do is to remain on your childish mind
to become so haughty and to stay unkind.

how can you say that you are totally wise?
as if you are human and others are mice
when the words of others, for you seem useless
when your thoughts are full of absolute greatness.

how can you say that you are bright?
when others are always wrong and you are always right
and why are you always praising your might?
now that you see the Rulers are small on your sight

why are you always saying "you can"
and that you're using others for the things "you can't"
yet why would you try to ask for the help of others?
when it is always your work that always matters

how can you say that your knowledge is infinite?
when you don"t know even your own limit
yet why did you think that others are behind?
when you don't even know how to open your mind

(special thanks to tearful teenager)
for the helpful suggestions for this poem and also for being kind

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  • 13 years ago

    by Beverlyn

    I love it. i can feel the reality on it.
    Well. we have to accept that others are close-minded that it seems they're the only one with "brain".
    --that's reality.....

  • 13 years ago

    by Jayc

    Hello! thank you very much for your comment. you know what? your comment encourage me to write again. i admit i was discouraged because i have limitations in English writing. thanks a lot tearful teenager.

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle

    Wow, you should really write more, and if you have, you should put more on here. This was amazing. I really enjoyed it. I gave it a 5/5.
    Michelle

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    How can you say that your knowledge is infinite?
    when you don"t know even your own limit
    yet why did you think that others are behind?
    when you dont know how to open your mind
    ==
    Not only did the poem flow so well but ask many questions that maybe hard for some to answer.
    very well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Countess of Monte Cristo

    Loved it Jayc. Looking forward to more of your writings. The wording was not bad either.

    Walah