Comments : Open your mind

  • 16 years ago

    by Countess of Monte Cristo

    Loved it Jayc. Looking forward to more of your writings. The wording was not bad either.

    Walah

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    How can you say that your knowledge is infinite?
    when you don"t know even your own limit
    yet why did you think that others are behind?
    when you dont know how to open your mind
    ==
    Not only did the poem flow so well but ask many questions that maybe hard for some to answer.
    very well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle

    Wow, you should really write more, and if you have, you should put more on here. This was amazing. I really enjoyed it. I gave it a 5/5.
    Michelle

  • 14 years ago

    by Jayc

    Hello! thank you very much for your comment. you know what? your comment encourage me to write again. i admit i was discouraged because i have limitations in English writing. thanks a lot tearful teenager.

  • 14 years ago

    by Beverlyn

    I love it. i can feel the reality on it.
    Well. we have to accept that others are close-minded that it seems they're the only one with "brain".
    --that's reality.....