Reguardless of how sad this poem was, I reather enjoyed it. Very nicely done.

Very deep and meaning full
I loved it

Adena

This poem is very sad and deep. trust me wheni say this i feel ur pain I to have lost someone i love without saying goodbye. And without knowing how she died some say she was murdered others say she did it herself i dont know the truth tho. My Mom is gone forever...And i dont know how

Also as a senior to this website i give u the vote. :)

Also as a senior to this website i give u the vote. :)

*One tear becomes hard rock, refusing, sad
The other becomes Hopeless, waiting death quietly* that was my favourite part.
loved the idea. They seem so different.. though somewhat similiar..

keep on writing n_n

Right off the bat the first stanza described great feelings of sorrow and longing for a certain person's touch.

It was unique how you let each tear symbolize mourning over something different or reacting to sorrow in a different way.

The last line was powerful.

I love rain...lol
i dance in it. lol
good poem.

I love it. it has so much emotion in it.

5/5

A poem with point is what is so grate i loved it the depth of your wrighting the sarrow in your words its grate.

Weow i really loved this piece. it was so different. very creative, and heartfelt. i can feel the emotions. and the title is perfect. this is a very inspiring poem. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Incredible darling.
you deff. have my vote babe.

This poem may be sad but it is written very well Good Job 5/5

This was truely Awesome!
I loved it even though it was sad.
This was a wonderful piece that was well written. Loved it!
5/5

~JANA

CJ,

I love how you gave your tears a name.
It is so hard to deal with the pain love brings and being able to write about it gives so much relief, don't you think so?

Hugs my sweet friend,

5/5 Ingrid

Omg this is sooooo sad :(

Good job