I live in a home.....

by Invited   Jul 16, 2008


I live in a home
Where commuters,
Roam around the city
And the bustling city
Is filled with polluted air.
I live in a home
Where crime rate
Is reasonably high
And you can't see the blue sky
because of the smog that fills the air
I live in a home
Where business
And democracy is legend
Politics, is a huge mess
Yet living in a home is
Known as common wealth.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Countess of Monte Cristo

    Hey ! Thank you for your comments, and guess what? You're on my favourite authors lists as well. You're young, but you're poems are extremely compelling. Good Job, Young Lady :) I fully support ya. Walah

  • 16 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    This is beautifully written with so much insight from such young eyes.
    At first I found it to be a sad poem until I read the final verse.
    You seem to have insight into deeper meaning than most your age and many that are much older I would love to follow the growth expressed in all you write---JIM 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SoUrNameIsTia

    Very good poem. and its true everywere.

    5/5

    ~tia

  • 16 years ago

    by Osita

    Good work!
    5/5

    lu

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    I think you should choose a new home then

    lol

    but i am not sure about the smog or smoke?

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