They Were In Love

by Kayla   Jul 16, 2008


The girl was torn,
Felt completely alone.
Her pain ran ever so deep,
Right down to her bones.

The boy was new in school,
Always quiet, completely shy.
Ready to finally stop moving around,
Sick of always having to say goodbye.

The two souls intertwined,
On that rainy September day.
Whenever he took her hand,
He also took her breath away.

They were both inseparable,
So crazy and completely in love.
Head over heels for one another,
Each other's angel from above.

He carried around her books,
And also carried her heart.
He never really told her,
That he was hers from the start.

Finally stopped regretting the past,
They both lived for the moment.
Couldn't tear them a part for anything,
They were stuck together like cement.

Who knew it would all end,
With one simple phone call.
Suddenly every thing was crushed,
Especially the future she once saw.

He had to tell her goodbye,
It was especially cold that day.
They couldn't even see each other,
Before his bus rolled away.

People tell her to just move on,
That was almost a year ago.
They haven't talked in forever,
Yet her feelings for him still show.

When they meet back up someday,
They'll remember when they were together.
They were both truly in love with each other,
Their feelings will live on forever.

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I couldn't sleep last night. I was just thinking and thinking of my ex-boyfriend Tyler. This is basically our story. We had to break up because he moved away, but I know our feelings will last forever. They've lasted a year without us even speaking. Thanks for reading.

7/16/08

~Kayla~

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  • 16 years ago

    by halie

    Awww
    im srry tht happend
    but im sure it will work out in the end
    tht was an amazing write
    :)
    5/5
    great job

    -halie

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Kaylalalala. So I'm in a commenting mood and i feel guilty for not reading your poems in a while. I don't do great with love poems...

    buttttt here we go. :)

    I loved the beginning and the end, ((and the middle. rofl)). The entire poem dripped with your love for him. It was sweet and...almost regretful. Like, you miss him and wish he hadn't ever left. especially the line saying that it was colder that day..

    absolutely beautiful, kayla. if it's meant to work out, babe, it will. you know, i love you lots and lots. i miss you too. i know you're busy working, but if you need to talk about anything, i'm still juts a PM away. *hugs* <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    Aww. Lol. Nice poem. My first boyfriend had to leave to go back to Colorado, but its ok because the 7 months i spent with him are still in my memories. I like this poem. 5/5