This is the song i wrote . tell me what you think. yeah it needs work. :)
- v1 -
hand on my shoulder, one set of prints on the beach
into your soul your eyes reveal but cant reach
you find yourself always crying
your tears are all the memories dying
as soon as one thing goes right
the wrong things come into sight
- chorus -
no tears are worth crying
no starts are worth falling
no dreams worth undreamed
no time worth unspent
impossible as it may seem
for one to reach their dream
-v2-
knelt by your bed you pray
for the days to get shorter and you to last longer
letting go is always the hardest part
with your heart in one place and your head in the clouds you live day to day
heart strings so used and so strained
you feel nothing new was gained
a mystery to me, what you always see
used to feel so grown
now i cant get passed the dial tone
faking a smile just to get by
knowing you life is all a lie
-chorus-
-v3-
like the imperfect patterns of rain drops
beginning so hard then stops
no goodbye yet no sing of life
the beginning was never filled with strife
following the wrong path to which i was aligned
on the dotted line i should never have signed
that car free life seems so far away
so lost in the dark Ive gone astray
-chorus-
-outro-
when it seems life's got the best of you
look deep inside the dreams it used to
light up your face, make you feel strong
that thought you haven't dreams in so long
in your eyes i see what Ive sen in mine
together we dace among the stars until the end of time
