Watching and watching

by NicoleBaby101   Jul 16, 2008


You watched the tears run down my face,

you watched the blood go to the floor,

but that is all you did,

you kept watching and watching,

watching me die slowly within,

watching me hurt,

and knowing what was coming,

but did nothing,

except just wait and wait for the right time,

i just want it to be over

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  • 16 years ago

    by Laith

    Somepart of me died with that poem.....or should I say in that master piece.....you letterly rock.

  • 16 years ago

    by paths of peace

    I like this one(:

  • 16 years ago

    by bleedingximperfection

    Amazing.
    It was sad, I loved it.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Austin

    Well done. I liked it. Very sad.

  • 16 years ago

    by Adam RIP Lesthat and Cody Hayden

    Wow hun. this poem was dark, and deep. very well written and the flow was good. 5/5
    **lesthat

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