Life

by kate   Jul 16, 2008


Life must truly be something valuable,otherwise i wouldn't long for it so badly.Not just life by way of breathing,blinking, or even a beating heart,but by way of happiness,fulfillment,love,caring....wholeness.
I have so long been searching for this life and still yet insanity and pain is all i've stumbled upon. Everyday I wake up disappointed,for when i lie down to sleep I wish that I would never wake again.
Either i should stay in my dreams for all eternity or find eternity its self. I don't believe that i should wake up a hallow shell day after day hoping not to be alone.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nicko

    Kate

    This works really well very palpable, the sadness is portrayed very well, believable!

    Well done

  • 16 years ago

    by kate

    "I don't believe that i should wake wake up a hallow shell day after day hoping not to be alone."

    this line you put wake twice, I don't know if you did that for the poem or you didn't realized it was there, but other than that this poem was great. It felt like the only thing you want is love but it seems that everyday when you wake up it doesn't seem like its going to happen. It will sweetie =]

    keep it up.
    keep on writing.
    love always and forever.

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