This poem reminds me of myself. im in this situation right now. i hate my life right now and i couldnt take it so i started cutting .. before i overdosed but thats a different story.

but i like this poem. it touched me. 5/5

Oh. my. gosh.

Okay.. so.. I just relapsed.. It's not the brightest moment in my life.. It's just weird that right after I relaspe, I read this..

Blah..

the blade is so sharp but yet so cheap.
`` I love this line. It's like how can something so destructive be so cheap? Or at least that's what I thought.

I keep on cutting, I haven't done this in months.
Its a shame I broke the habit but feels so good.
`` This line.. it's me right this second. I'm very emotional right now.. and this line is just making me cry harder.

but I'm like wasted of cutting.
`` I don't get this line.. it confuses me. Maybe it's because I'm not really thinking right now, though.

I can't here and my eyes are blurry.
`` "here" should be "hear".

This was good..
Sorry if my comment sucked.

Keep writing!
Cayce

I was already in tears, but the depression and hatred in this made the fall faster. my favorite lines were
"streaming like a water fall.
I hear my name being called."
and
"I hold out my hand.
hoping you would touch it.
the feeling of yours on mine.
I fell into place against yours."

i found a few errors
"the blood pounding down my leg."
pouring?
"he blood is socked into my skirt and shoes."
soaked? i think you meant soaked but you spelt socked.
this is painful and miserable yet so beautiful. you are a word artist!
great piece.

Its good that your clean now i used to do my wrists you made such a good visual with your words

A great write, I really enjoyed it. In some parts of the poem, it was a bit difficult to read due to the rhthym (I kept stuttering over words in my mind) but otherwise, it was a nice piece.

Im really glad that you have stop cutting... Whenever i read such poems I feel those cuts are slashed on me...
good write... but could have been better... I hv read your other writes so I wont say this is your best... this is just my opinion...

keep writing..
4/5

"streaming like a water fall."
``I loved this simile. :] Wow. Oh, and waterfall I believe is one word.

"Its a shame I broke the habit but feels so good."
``It's not its.
``and if I were you id' say.. "It's a shame I broke the habit but [it] feels so good." --I added it in there. Sounds better that way.

"the blood is soaked into my skirt and shoes."
``Ahh, I could totally picture this.

"but I'm like wasted of cutting."
``You probably don't need the word like in there..

``Overall, a great write. I thought you did a pretty good job with the imagery in this piece. I'm glad to hear this poem isn't true.. and that you've been clean for 6 months. Congrats. :] Don't slip back into those bad habits though. Well done. This piece was full of imagery and great description. Nice to see another piece from you. Keep it up. 5/5 (:

Oh am so sorry n am happy u dont cut ur self no more

I hold out my hand.
hoping you would touch it.
the feeling of yours on mine.
I fell into place against yours.
the razor drops to the floor.
were I once have layed

I really love this stanza... something about this poem just makes it great! everything really, i guess. its great! captured my attention and the poem never got boring to me... great great job..