When I'm..

by Dying Beautifully   Jul 17, 2008


Right now I am talking to you,
Giving you all my love.
Right now I am unsure what to do,
Not sure what your thinking of.

Later on when I'm 20 I'll be talking with you,
Giving each other all our love.
Later when I'm 20 We will know what to do,
We'll know exactly what we're thinking of.

Much later at 30 I'll be yelling for you,
Professing my one true love.
Much later at 30 I'll be nearly due,
From well the stork was above.

Some time at 40 I'll be sitting by you,
Watching our kids find love.
Some time at 40 parenting will almost be through,
And plans for grandchildren we'll hear of.

At 50 I'll be clenching to the time I have with you,
Giving you every ounce of my love.
At 50 I'll start to realize my time is almost through,
And I'll be your now beloved.

At 60 I'll be standing out in the rain screaming for you,
Crying because your the one I love.
At 60 we'll be remembering the old times that flew,
And the times that came from above.

At some point in life I will have no choice in leaving you,
And from the heavens I'll still love.
At that point there will be nothing either of us could do,
But to remember the best of,
The good,
The bad,
And the love.
To see each morning as the last,
And forget all the bad things in our past.
Memories are made up of the past,
So why make bad memories last.

Right now I'm talking to you,
Trying to prove my love.
Not really knowing what you'll do,
Or who your thinking of.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Yazdan

    Hello allo. I kjnow you probobly wont get this anytime soon but i figured i'd leave a comment. Once again an amazing poem. I'd be curious to see how well ya do with other forms of poetry. Personaly i find being adventurous with structure and rhyming scheme help with the creativity. The only thing as far as constructive critisism goes, is that your line length varies from 6 sylables to 14 lol. Your sense of flow is great but having more even line lengths helps establish a solid rhyming scheme and makes the poem as a whole seem to flow much better. Love the poem and love the author :P. I miss you

  • 16 years ago

    by Connor

    This is definately my favourite it's an amzing poem, your an amazing poet, and your overall an amazing person! KUDOS to you!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Great poem! I loved it. Will you ever reach 100 years and still moving on? This is like that five for fighting song. Fantabulous, 5/5!