I really liked this one. it was beautiful. great emotion was expressed.

and baby dont cryfor the fear of tomorrow
let the wind wisk your sorrows,

away

that was a perfect ending to a lovely poem such as this. job well done! 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Yeahh agree with u.. 5/5

^, i really have nothing more to add, besides that i too loved the ending, and i really enjoyed that, keep writing!

I loved it.... great expression of emotions. Keep it up and good luck. XOXO Trish

I really love this poem of you,
great job, beautiful written
5/5

I really really loved it... and its true don't waste yur time crying it was suppose to happen..it might hurt for a while but it will gett better.. This was was nice