For You

by That One Girl   Jul 17, 2008


You told me you were depressed
I told you I would be there
I held you every night
And let you cry
I never let you out of my sight
I saw the marks start to appear
You were cutting, it was clear
I asked you about it
You said you would stop
I guess you didnt

I went to see you today
You looked so cold lying in that box
A tear slipped down my cheek
My love wasnt enough
I grab your hand but you were still limp
Your mom put her arm around me
he loved you, you know
I couldnt help it
The tears came flooding
I dont know what to do anymore
You are what I lived for
I went home that night
And stood on daddys favorite chair
Tied the rope to the chandelier
And the other end to my neck
And went to see you again

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nicko

    Told you i'd be back

    great first stanza it worked really well
    the last line to soon for me!

    good work well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Rebecca

    Thats soo gud i really enjoyed that keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    This is very touching... I prefer happy endings though... :)
    good write... the emotions are all there..

    "And went to see you again "
    ^^ very heartfelt...

    keep writing..

  • 16 years ago

    by MariaJose94

    Its actually pretty goodd

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    I can understand how you felt , it is a very ugly feeling to feel not enough for somone , never can handle it myself , specialy when my girl died ,
    i hope you dont go to see him soon ,
    life is short you will see him soon enough
    this poem touch me a lot ,
    jsut in structure make it more then 2 paragraph and add some ryhming to it it would be perfect

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