Comments : For You

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Omgg. wow! this was amazingly written. i really loved this one. best one ive read so far. it was so sad yet it held so much meaning in every line. a great piece! 5/5.

    -ashlei.

  • 16 years ago

    by P00ki3B3ar

    *tear* that is so sad i gave you a 5

  • 16 years ago

    by P00ki3B3ar

    *tear* that is so sad i gave you a 5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    I can understand how you felt , it is a very ugly feeling to feel not enough for somone , never can handle it myself , specialy when my girl died ,
    i hope you dont go to see him soon ,
    life is short you will see him soon enough
    this poem touch me a lot ,
    jsut in structure make it more then 2 paragraph and add some ryhming to it it would be perfect

  • 16 years ago

    by MariaJose94

    Its actually pretty goodd

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    This is very touching... I prefer happy endings though... :)
    good write... the emotions are all there..

    "And went to see you again "
    ^^ very heartfelt...

    keep writing..

  • 16 years ago

    by Rebecca

    Thats soo gud i really enjoyed that keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Nicko

    Told you i'd be back

    great first stanza it worked really well
    the last line to soon for me!

    good work well done!