I liked it alot though i do think that you should spell out your words it will make it look and sound more professional.

This poem is an everyday routine of pain that people go through and i think that someone just writing down what someone else might be going through is great :) nice work

Loved this poem. Its so well written. But i do agree with Intoxicating smile, it might help if you spell out the full words. But apart from that its very deep and powerful. Excellent poem. 5/5