This poem pin points around 3 people .. and we can be one of them to relate to. That's one part why I really like about this. It shows you how even when you love someone else, another person might be loving you as much as how you're loving the other person. If that makes any sense. So I guess the whole point is take time to realize and know what you deserve more rather than what you want, but can't get.

This is so hard bcoz when U love someone ,it's just outta ur hands..it is ur heart that leads u not ur mind..but if u can't be really happy so fake it as sadness kills..
Good job..I enjoyed reading ur poem so keep up the good work..

What 2 start with?! Actually, it's difficult for me 2 be moved by ordinary poems, but urs is not like that for it really moved me and it's really wonderful..
5/5

I love the topic, this is a story that you can actually find wherever you go and many can relate to ... I personally relate to it quite intensively. I am quite sure that others will do as well.

A very lovely write indeed. :))