This is a really great poem. you have a great gift. if this is really true about you and you play the guitar as an escaped then keep it up everyone needs a way to escape their own lives. for me its dance. keep it up. 5/5

Haha People have been rough on you. You need to add some sort of structure, and art into this. It's almost like you're talking to a person right in front of you, instead of reading a poem.

I respect your talent. you write about whats most important to you and that is a very good way of writing. that way you can truly explain your emotions toward it.

I like this, I don't play guitar or anything but I can definatly respect the escape... thanks for the comment by the way

I really liked this one. It has a unique concept and the flow was great. It showed a lot of emotion as well... very good write.