Comments : Think...

  • 16 years ago

    by kasey

    So very true i agree 100% with your poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I Agree with your poem as well i thought it was so very well written!

  • 16 years ago

    by The Hidden Poet

    I editted something...

  • 16 years ago

    by XXXNellieXXX

    I learned something

  • 16 years ago

    by J u l e s

    Being emotional is not what you think,
    No it is not enjoying pain,
    It is not wanting to get hit by a train,
    Think,
    before you act,
    You might hurt someone bad
    And trust me, you won't be glad.

    ^^^ This part is what I am might now... Ahh I am not thinking about what I am saying and it is hurting people around me. I hate that I do it but when I get all these feeling I take it out on others.. I loved this part though I really really did.

    Being in touch with your emotions,
    Is not a bad thing,
    Stop the ring of stereotypes
    And hateful insults,
    Come on and act like adults.

    ^^^ More people should act like adults, but in the place we live in that doesn't seem like it is going to happen anytime soon. Unless the world magically learns how to let things go. Until then we will have to live with this to try to deal with it.

    Let people be who they want to be,
    Do not insult them or put them down,
    Your just making yourself look like a clown

    ^^^ This part I really liked, except the word clown. [[Well thats only me]] I have a fear of clowns so yeah. Any way your poem was amazing, It really was not what I was expecting to read but now that I read it. I really enjoy it. Great job on this <33

  • 16 years ago

    by Tasha

    I like it alot

  • 16 years ago

    by Just Jessy

    This poem is just amazing! Its a shame people wont actually listen to it though. Keep writing your good:) Comment some of mine please?

    5/5 my love xx

  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    WOW!!! i agree with ur amazing poem. I love it. another greatjob=)

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    I so agree with ur poem, dude this poen rocks 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Amir Riveroll

    Kool poem;))

  • 16 years ago

    by Amir Riveroll

    Its Very tru...;)...