A Prayer To God

Please guide me in my life, and help me get past the struggles, hardships, problems, and wars that will be brought upon me.
-- everyone wishes for this so many people will be able to relate right off the bat

Every single day, every living moment, is a sign of your everlasting love for me. I need your comforting arms to reach out to me in the time of darkness.
---gives a sense of perminance that you know there is always someone there to help you

I long for your sanctifying grace to wash over me all the days that I live. For without your never ending kindness and love, where would we be in this world today?
--this made me thinkk about the people i wouldn't be here with out i liked this verse

You are what makes the sun rise, and fall in the late evening. You are the almighty creator of all the earth, the one true God that I believe in.
---not many people right about God and i like that you chose a topic that i dont come across often made this unique

As my knees slowly fall down to you, I pray from deep inside my soul. Thanking you for the air I breathe, and for the precious gift of life that you graciously gave me.
---aw i loved the ending great job!
5/5 <33

Beautiful! You completely summed up what I believe and feel about God. You're an excellent writer.

And thank you for your support on my poem.

5/5 wow
i such a great poem/prayer.
great job!

Wow. This piece is.. very strong. I loved it. Though my beliefs are different from the ones you show in the poem, I liked it because it was really heartfelt, and it seemed like you really needed help from the one person who can give you the help you need. 5/5

``Briana

Very excellent... i believe GOD loves us and he will neve leave us intimes of our troublesome... 5/5