Each night my dreams are memories

I reallllly enjoyed that line. It stood out a lot to me.

I liked the repetition you did at the end of each stanza and the title fit nicely.

Everything flowed well and the storyline was consistant. Well done. Five out of five.

"The evening's memories reflecting
Times shared in our past
Those hardest on my heart it seems
Are the longest that last"

^Loved that part. It clearly states your emotions and feelings, and the words you used were so perfect!

Great work, loved each bit of this poem, keep it up.