I loved you more than anything..

by Brittany   Jul 17, 2008


I loved you more than the air i breathed
i loved you more than anything

why did you pick her over me
why cant we live happily

we did it once why cant we do it again
but you said this has to end

i was crushed
i was broken
there werent any words left
to be spoken

you left without a thought to care
yuo left me without a love to share

plz comment this came from my heart not my mind

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  • 16 years ago

    by mandy

    Very well put. I like the rhyming and how it all flows together so nicely. The message came through loud and clear, but there was much depth within each word you wrote. Fantastic job, 5/5!

    -mandy :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Lost and Delirious

    Awwww, i can relate (kind-of) but I love it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer Mahin

    This was from the heart, and that is what makes it good. I know how u feel. Keep writing from your heart.

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