OMG I 100% AGREE!!!!!!!!!! I can't stand he thought that a defenseless animal out there is being hurt for no reason at all. It actually makes me feel sick. when i hear stories about it or i see ads on TV i acually go look for my cat & give her the biggest hug because i cant imagine urting my cat, its just wrong & sick & terrifying. If i could save ALL the animals from cruelty i definitly, DEFINITELY would without a doubt!!!!!!!

your poem: 100/100!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you so much for your comment hun, xoxox

God, the opening is so powerful
"The Chains cut so deep..
Its hard for me to breath.."
it just pulls you in and makes you want to keep reading! 5/5, i really liked it. i have to admit i have never really paid much mind to animal cruelty, but this poem opens up my eyes.

Wow. This is amazingly written. Its so incredibly true and i agree with you all the way. I agree with Brittany ^^ the first few lines just drag you into the poem, keeping you reading til the end.

Its a very sad poem, but beyond creative. 5/5

Awww...this is a terribly sad poem..
yet..it's true though..which makes it even sadder.
i don't know why people would do that to animals at all..sigh.
i salute you for making a poem on this issue. :)

i gave u a 5. :)

That is so sad. But its a great poem and I can tell you have a huge heart and a huge place for animals.

Wow. i may only be a cat person, but i love my cat! to write something from the animals POV is not only interesting, but very effective.

after reading this i want to go hold my cat. u have successfully triggered an emotional response. i think that means you have outdone yourself this time.
~Ben