by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden Jul 18, 2008
category :
Friendship, family /
goodbye
You planned to shelter me from cradle to grave |
by Heba
This poem was really touching and well written. |
Hmm nice write, im guessing you wrote this in the prospective of a brother, i assume? you wrote it wonderfully. the reader gets the sense that the mom and son didn't have that great of a connection throughout his life and growing up. anyways. nice write. great flow. amazing like all the others you write. 5/5. |