I was very moved with this poem.
I have read a few of yours and I love what your writing about here. =]
Ive been looking for some good poems on this so I thankyou for that.

Your word choice was used in an elegant manner.

"His poetic feet was actually pathetic"
I love this line, I knew exactly what you were talking about. The way you enter the story or message of your poem.

"...tears from God's eyes"
that was beautiful

This tells what would of happened if you follow your directions and believe in the true thing.But sadly thats not where they turned.

Thankyou this was a great read.
-Angie

Wow I've never read anything like this before. I really liked this poem. I love how people decided to read amazing poetry, that they got so into it they didn't know a flood was going to happen., thats why they all drowned. It was like the poet was good at writing because it was to good to stop reading.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

I have to admit the title mystified me at first and I didn't know what the poem was about till the fourth line. I find this poem somewhat ironic, sarcastic, and humorous. But there is a tragic undertone because of the subject. Good job

I liked this a lot. It was well written, it flowed amazingly, and your word choice is once again fabulous.

5/5

``Briana

I've always enjoyed reading poerty about Noah's Ark. This poem is very beautiful. I honestly found nothin wrong with it. It was perfect. 5/5

That last line was great. It was just a nice way of saying...you all suck and are lazy asses. It was great. :D

The topic was interesting and was a delightful change.

The rhyming was consistant and the flow was soothing so I'd say you did a pretty darn good job of intriguing the reader.

Five out of five.

Beautifully written.

Perfect rhyming and a great storyline bring this poem together so nicely. The wicked (rich and uncaring) were too wrapped up in what they felt was important and thus unlike Noah, who listened, did not survive.

Great job. 5/5