Confussed passion

by Deven   Jul 18, 2008


Bottled passion, when i released it i showed you what real

emotions were. Now use this to find who truly loves you. But

here the trick of it all did i do it for you or ........me. The

thoughts have wasted away in my mind. i don't even know,

but hay all we did was sit and talk that day right.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Conrad

    Im going to be brutally honest. Its confusing and if your going to give that effect, get rid of the ...'s and make some lines.

  • 16 years ago

    by SoUrNameIsTia

    Thats a diff one for me! it was enjoyable 2 read though. the ending was good.

    ~tia :]

  • 16 years ago

    by NoUr

    This is kinda special..write more..

  • 16 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    Nice poem, Deven, keep it up. Greta x

  • 16 years ago

    by JESSICA

    Well is there more? it was really good but what about the ending?

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