"Solitary Cicatrix" i think thats what the name should be.. Meaning lonely and trapped scars. Its like your trapped with the sorrow and darkness in your life and the scars are shown, but left unattended to. so i think that name fits great. it was an amazing poem. simply put yet again, and that style works amazingly for you. keep it up!! :) |
I'm not much of a fan of emo poems, don't really see the point. Not sure what to say about it haha As long as you wrote the truth and left nothing back I guess you can be satisfied with this. I'd call this poem.... Broken Dreams :) |