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  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Ok it is good one , good rhyming and good flow in the feelings , but it is 1 block 1 paragraph , it make the eye afgraid to read , i hope you split them into paragraphs , it is beter and cleareed to the reader to read

  • Yeah,you think right...my poems are all about him...almost all...
    And I know too...
    Well,I love this...
    Remember...Never say never...

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