Wo Na Jata(He wouldn't have turned away)

by Lonely Rider   Jul 18, 2008


Wo Na Jata

Wo pal wo baatei ab satate hai
Guzre hue din ki yaad dilate hai
Har lamha uske intezar mei
Na jane kitne asu bahte hai
Yu muh fer kar wo na jata
In aakho par agar
Andhere ka basera na hota.

Translation:

He wouldnt have turned away

Heart-to-heart and those lovely moments
Now are so distrauting,
Of the yesteryear days
they keep me reminding,
Every instant tears trickle
Still I keep waiting,

He wouldnt have turned away
ignoring my cries,
If only darkness had not shadowed
the light of my eyes.

**Originally its written in Hindi.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    This poem really touched my heart... I can relate to this... Heart-breaking story....you melt my heart... :(

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    RL
    This is just so beautiful yet haunting.

    Heart-to-heart and those lovely moments
    Now are so distrauting,
    Of the yersteryear days
    they keep me reminding,
    Every instant tears trickle
    Still I keep waiting,

    We always wait thinking things will return to the way they were when we were happy. Living in the pain just waiting.

    He wouldnt have turned away
    ignoring my cries,
    If only darkness had not shadowed
    the light of my eyes.

    I love the ending of this piece. The imagery is great.

    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    It was so touching poem... n every true person in a true relationship has gone thru the situations in ur poem..

    it was marvellous n ur english translation helped other family members on PnQ also enjoy d wonderful poem originally written in our national language Hindi..

    Keep it up....

    Best wishes for ur next poem... guessing about it..

    All d best...:)

    Karan

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow, superb one, mindblowing indeed, memories o memories, they could surely brighten your days or make you regret every single breath.

    Great write dear

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    Your final lines really leave an effect. I think that is what captures the entire poem for me.