Your final lines really leave an effect. I think that is what captures the entire poem for me.

Wow, superb one, mindblowing indeed, memories o memories, they could surely brighten your days or make you regret every single breath.

Great write dear

all the best and take care

It was so touching poem... n every true person in a true relationship has gone thru the situations in ur poem..

it was marvellous n ur english translation helped other family members on PnQ also enjoy d wonderful poem originally written in our national language Hindi..

Keep it up....

Best wishes for ur next poem... guessing about it..

All d best...:)

Karan

RL
This is just so beautiful yet haunting.

Heart-to-heart and those lovely moments
Now are so distrauting,
Of the yersteryear days
they keep me reminding,
Every instant tears trickle
Still I keep waiting,

We always wait thinking things will return to the way they were when we were happy. Living in the pain just waiting.

He wouldnt have turned away
ignoring my cries,
If only darkness had not shadowed
the light of my eyes.

I love the ending of this piece. The imagery is great.

Love Cindy

This poem really touched my heart... I can relate to this... Heart-breaking story....you melt my heart... :(