*hates you for writing so beautifully*

The rooms feel hollow, as empty they grow,
A void that I just can't seem to fill,
It's just my chest without you here with me,
My heart is missing, though beating still.

^^ I love how this can be applied to many things. Missing love..missing faith, friendship..anything. The rhyme scheme and flow are absolutely breath-taking ((through out the whole poem, really)) and I loved the word choice.

The same four walls, weak as they stand,
Slowly slipping hues from blue to grey,
Color running away as life drains out,
Fading with each minute that you're away.

^^ This stanza is so visual for me. I dore the second line...the word slipping is well used. As is fading in the last line. ((obviously, i love the word usage)). but like i said, i could visualize this in a literal as well as figurative way.

absolutely gorgeous poem, both of you. *is jealous* keep it up. <3

Increadible one i must say
the best i have read today

nothing to add it is a perfect one
if it is a contest you would have won

you get a five from me to vote
it is excelent if i may quote
:)

WOW! This is such an amazing piece. Truly capitivating from the start and does not fail to continue withing this part.

The opening stanza was just so perfect and the imagery therein undoubtedly suited well with what you wanted to convey. An excellent write that no matter how many words of praise are said it will fall short of what one deserves. 100/5 from me.

Whoa you blew me away im completely and utterly SPEECHLESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

For once I'm speechless, 5/5. Em xx