A Memory of Love

by Just Sierra   Jul 18, 2008


It began as a classic romantic fairytale,
We thought could never expire
You burned right through me, melted me,
Like a candle caught on fire.

Your eyes, when trapped into mine,
Were flawless so it seemed,
So bright and pure like a cloudless day,
Only I could have dreamed...

When you held my hand in yours,
All trouble went away,
I could've sworn you once said to me
Forever you would stay

The three words never meant something
Until the day you spoke,
But just like the burning candle I love,
That fire turned to smoke.

Ever since you found your new love,
You threw me in the dark.
And I never thought so much beauty
Could die inside this heart.

And since you left, I could swear,
Forever came to an end,
My life I wanted to give to you,
I never got to spend.

This classic romantic fairytale ruined,
It all came to a close,
And all these precious memories
Withered in me like a rose.

It hurts to recall those memories,
The taste of your lips, I forgot.
But the love we had, forever remembered
Because a memory is all I've got.

*A/N*-I know it seems like another pathetic piece about loving someone who doesnt loveyou back...and it probably is, but I haven't ever put so much thought or heart into one of my poems before. I'm currently experiencing something that's a bit traumatizing for me, and I haven't slept all night. Words don't come to me easily, so this poem was difficult...but feedback would be nice. I poured my heart into this**

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  • 16 years ago

    by Clown

    Its a great poem, and wonderfully written. I know how you feel in this poem, im going through adivorce, never thought that would happen to me, so this poem spoke to me like it was for me or something, you continue to amaze me with your poetry, hope to hear from you, and dont mind a Nation of War, its just Razor Blades and Hand Grenades retyped cuz my computer deleted it by accitdent, so if you wanna cheak out my newer work, anything but that is pretty new on the top of the list

  • Beautiful!!

    love you babe

  • 16 years ago

    by JustAFoolInLove

    Hey there, stranger. remember your old friend zac? chelsea (not sure whether or not you remember her, but she remembers you) and i were talking the other day and you came up lol. how have you been? i freakin miss you! i dont have your number anymore.... so if you ever read this and you still have my number, please send me a text or gimme a call sometime. hope to hear from you!
    Zac

  • 16 years ago

    by courtney

    Awww love this was absolutely amazingly written. i am so sorry you're going through this. i know we dont talk much anymore but if you need me i'm here. hope you feel better