Rose( Haiku attempt)

The perfect image. Bravo.

Pretty good...nice imagery.

Looks ok to me. Good picture and word flow.

Like a striking photograph... that arrests the senses, defying description I pause...slowly drinking its beauty in... carried by emotion... overwhelmed its essence...is your poem.

Don't know about an attempt,this was well written with beautiful imagery.Maybe a look at ones self on a better day?

Grant