This is beautiful, it really captured the beauty of a rose. Great descriptions and this is a really well-written haiku. Good job!

Good one Kid. Your are on a roll.

This was stunning. Perfectly written. The imagery was astounding, and the flow was excellent. I loved it. 5/5

I do not know anything about haiku poetry

But I do know very well the inner beauty this delicate , rare white rose has to offer and I am truly the beter man for the pleasure of her company---5/5 JIM

I dont know about haiku but if u could tell me i'd be glad but all i can say is that the picture of the rose was perfectly visualised whilst reading it.

Don't know about an attempt,this was well written with beautiful imagery.Maybe a look at ones self on a better day?

Grant

Like a striking photograph... that arrests the senses, defying description I pause...slowly drinking its beauty in... carried by emotion... overwhelmed its essence...is your poem.

Looks ok to me. Good picture and word flow.

Pretty good...nice imagery.

The perfect image. Bravo.