Great piece you have written. Good flow, just don't let the flies get in the way. Hey, if you get the chance can you check some of mine out?

Lovely poem Randy, I think its written on a personal note, if it is then your a strong person. Kep writing, and take care.

:) great job, I know the feeling rather well, as you can tell in some of my writings. Keep it hun. you truly do have talent here.

--Sher

wow i just loved it, thanks so much for sharing it.......

This is really a beautiful poem Randy! I enjoyed it very much. The flow is great.

Randy, This was truly a beautiful well written poem. I truly enjoyed. hugs, love, *Ann*