I liked this a lot. I thought it was good. However it was more of a quote. But I understand what you are saying and I think you could almost expand on it more. To get the point across more. Like expand more on what you mean. Interesting idea though. 5/5.

Have you ever been cried
but theres no tears to come out
^^Should "cried" be "crying"? It sort of doesn't make sense if it's supposed to be left as is.

There are times you want to cry
but you need to hide it

And you just don't realize these tears
you keep on hiding earned inside your heart
^^This doesn't make sense to me, but then again, I'm reading it like it's a sentence.

That causes pain and it turns
into your sensitive heart and soul

Overall, I thought that it was ok. I agree with Temps that it did sound more like a quote. I'll give it a 4/5, because it was a good idea, but you need to work on it a bit more :)

I think it's pretty much like an idea for a poem, a feeling to describe. The idea is great, though; it's hard to hide emotions all the time.
i felt the first 2 lines:
Have you ever been cried <-- btw, i guess it shuld be "have you ever cried?"
but theres no tears to come out
and next 2 lines:
There are times you want to cry
but you need to hide it

-- describe really different feelings, so which one does the ending:

And you just don't realize these tears
you keep on hiding earned inside your heart

That causes pain and it turns
into your sensitive heart and soul

- refer to?

i guess you could write a poem about feelings you've mentioned, but this piece is not a poem yet. It's just my opinion, don't get mad at me, please:)
3/5 because this piece is FAIR, but not GOOD yet. But i strongly believe you can develop it a lot. The idea with "Have you ever...." beginning is so good: why don't you describe a feeling more, compare it to something, find touching words? words like "sensitive" are so neutral; try to touch the reader's heart with the magic of your words.

Short.
id extend it a bit
but i still enjoyed it<3

Nicely written. flow was perfect. and the word choice was good. overall a great poem.5/5
** harlea

Everybody has to cry and although we want to hold it inside of us to be strong, sometimes it really makes us weaker. Excellent job with this piece you portrayed emotions of not only yourself but other people as well. Great job 5/5 GG23

"Have you ever been cried
but theres no tears to come out"
`Put a question mark after this, it's a sentenced. A little puncuation wouldn't hurt the poem.

"There are times you want to cry
but you need to hide it"
`Oh yes. I think this is very relateable. I know I can relate, just recently actually.

"That causes pain and it turns
into your sensitive heart and soul"
`Yes it does. Infact, I just went through this just recently. It's such a true statement.

Overall, a good write. It's so true and very easily relateable. Uhm, however.. You could easily expand on this.. It's such a short thought but I think there's so much you could say! Dig into your imagination and keep adding. 4/5.

Have you ever cried
but there are no tears to come out

There are times you want to cry
but you need to hide it

And you just don't realize these tears
you keep on hiding inside your heart

That causes pain and it turns
into your sensitive heart and soul

This poem speaks to my heart and soul, sweet lig

It would just work better for me if the word been was not in the first line
And earned was not in the sixth line

Have you ever been cried
but theres no tears to come out
^^ Apostrophe in the word THERES was missing and a question mark after the word OUT.

It was short and as a poem it could have been better if it was longer. Quotes, it will do..Keep writing..

Short, but very well written, its a good read, but i think it shouldve been posted in your quotes, but either way, i liked it.

Your a very talented writer ! =D
4/5?
Dollface.

Omg that was just amazing....it brought tears to my eyes actually. It was short but very beautiful so awesome job =D But this is so true...I mean like when you cry...and keep on cryong someday itll feel like you cant cry anymore, this shows it really well. Strong emotion ahaha. People are right but who cares everyones poems has flaws but blah!! Everyones poems are amazing like this because it is just amazing how its written!! SHORT AND FULL OF EMOTION

=D

CourtneyxHolland

Oh ya just thank you so much for the comments on my poems =D they ment so much to me :]

Much Loves for Chu

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5/5

Wow this is really has a deep emotions