First off, I find this format unique and interesting. Secondly, I liked this poem for the fact that the title was IF and you capitolized every IF in the poem, that was on eof the things that really stuck out ot me and was unique as well. Thirdly, you did a wonderful job asking questions and I loved how you answered your first few questions as well. There's always room for improvement, and I hope you continue writing. Great start. 5/5.