Im letting you go

by A piece of my broken heart is embedded in you forever   Jul 18, 2008


I'm letting you go,
I'm setting you free,
We were meant not to be together,
We are meant to let go and set ourselves free,
I'm not who you want me to be,
You're not who i want you to be,
We connect, we click,we argue, we agree,
Yet it seems we are just not meant to be,
Maybe i should just let it be,
But my mind says that i should set you free,
That i should let you go,
I really care about you,
I truly love you,
But i need to sacrifice what we have,
Because we are just too different in our ways,
The way i think is not how you think,
I just wish that i could change the way you think,
But then again you wouldn't be who you want to be,
So I'm letting you go,
I'm setting you free,
We connect, we click,we argue, we agree,
Yet it seems we are just not meant to be
Let me break my heart with my own hands,
Let me give you one more piece,
You have my heart, but not its all pieces,
This one piece of my heart, let me keep it to my own-self,
Maybe i can find someone who i can give this broken heart of mine,
I pray that you can find someone who can be with you forever,
Who thinks the way you do,
Who looks at life just like you look,
I pray with my heart that you get what you need,
Because I'm not what you need,
I'm sorry that i have to let go,
But it is for your own good,
Maybe you will never understand this,
Maybe one day you will,
We were not meant to be friends,
We were not meant to be lovers,
We are just not meant to be together,
Before it gets impossible to leave,
I have to set you free,
i have to let you go,
So now let me say it,
Please leave............
Because now i have let you go,
I have set you free......................

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  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    I think you need to work more on the structure of the poem. I am no expert but I feel this poem is a little bit difficult to read.

    You should maybe divide it to different stanzas.

    There is absolutely too many "I", if you ask me. Try to avoid them.

    You could also see a little bit if you could make the poem maybe shorter...

    Theme of the poem is nice... You have some ideas...It's lovely love poem. At the moment I am not the idealistic person to read love poems but I can say it is interesting subject to write about... setting the one you love free.

    So you asked my opinion and you got one. This is just my opinion about the poem. You are the author and decide whatever to make changes or not in your poem.

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