It's Crazy

I can relate tot his poem as I know many others can but,I did spot a few minor mistakes that need to be fixed.

After all the hurt that I've been through
I Can't see my future without you
I can't see myself getting over you
It's crazy but it's true

^^In the second line 'can't' doesn't need to be capitalized.^^

I actually cried when i thought i couldn't say i love you anymore
I want to hear your voice once more
I wan to feel your touch once more
It;s crazy but i don't want my heart to be sore

^^I think that you should break down the first line into two different lines and change the semi-colon to an apostrophe.^^

Loving you is so easy why couldn't getting over you be the same
I still smile when i hear your name
But to you, it's all a game
It's crazy, but it stays the same

^^Again,I think it would be better if you broke the first line into two.^^

You made me jump with joy
You made smile
You made me cry
You made me love and i don't want to get over you
It's crazy but i cannot stop, it's true.
Cuz, baby, I'm crazy for you

^^I think that this stanza should be broken into two different stanzas like this:

"You made me jump with joy
You made smile
You made me cry
You made me love

And I don't want to get over you
It's crazy but i cannot stop, it's true.
Cause, baby, I'm crazy for you"^^

All in all though,I am going to rate this as a 5 because the emotion was great.Those are just a few suggestions.Good poem.

--amber--

I can relate tot his poem as I know many others can but,I did spot a few minor mistakes that need to be fixed.

After all the hurt that I've been through
I Can't see my future without you
I can't see myself getting over you
It's crazy but it's true

^^In the second line 'can't' doesn't need to be capitalized.^^

I actually cried when i thought i couldn't say i love you anymore
I want to hear your voice once more
I wan to feel your touch once more
It;s crazy but i don't want my heart to be sore

^^I think that you should break down the first line into two different lines and change the semi-colon to an apostrophe.^^

Loving you is so easy why couldn't getting over you be the same
I still smile when i hear your name
But to you, it's all a game
It's crazy, but it stays the same

^^Again,I think it would be better if you broke the first line into two.^^

You made me jump with joy
You made smile
You made me cry
You made me love and i don't want to get over you
It's crazy but i cannot stop, it's true.
Cuz, baby, I'm crazy for you

^^I think that this stanza should be broken into two different stanzas like this:

"You made me jump with joy
You made smile
You made me cry
You made me love

And I don't want to get over you
It's crazy but i cannot stop, it's true.
Cause, baby, I'm crazy for you"^^

All in all though,I am going to rate this as a 5 because the emotion was great.Those are just a few suggestions.Good poem.

--amber--